2018最新雅思写作话题分析之Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do
unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this
would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.Do you agree
work on a volunteer basis 志愿工作
force all teenagers to do unpaid work 强迫所有青少年做没有报酬的工作
under enough pressure 承受足够的压力 the added responsibility 额外的责任
as demanding as a full-time job 跟全职工作一样要求很高
exam revision 考试复习 on top of attending lessons 在参加课程之外
have some free time 有空闲的时间 enjoy free time with their friends
has nothing to gain 没有任何可获得的东西
obliging young people to do unpaid work 强迫年轻人做免费的工作
go against the values of a free and fair society 违反自由和公平社会的价值
do something against their will 违反他们的想法
lead to resentment amongst young people 导致年轻人的憎恨
raise their children 养育他们的孩子 nobody is forced to volunteer 没有人被强迫做志愿者
the best system 最好的系统 work for free 免费工作 make this compulsory 把这变成义务性的
Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial
for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we
should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.
Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies,
without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time.
School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their
students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day.
When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it
with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities.
They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.
At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from
obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes
against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do
something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst
young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would
not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to
volunteer, and this is surely the best system.
In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in
my opinion we should not make this compulsory.(刚刚好250 words, band 9满分级别)